User blog comment:Goddess of Despair/Season 3 battle 4 Gladiator vs Zulu warrior (rematch)/@comment-422690-20130126184038

A couple quick constructive suggestions to improve your battle writing, Noob.

First off, use paragraph breaks. These dense walls of text are a pain to read. It also makes the fight itself awkwardly paced. Just hit enter twice (or return if you're lame and use a Mac) at an appropriate spot.

Second, check your spelling better. You have words used the wrong way (i.e, raze rather than raise).