User blog comment:Red Krystals/Bartimaeus vs Hellboy/@comment-4844014-20140518101814

If I can give you any advise as you're relatively new, try not to make your blog look like you pumped it out in 10 minutes, show that you actually tried to put some effort into it because from my perspective as a voter, it doesn't look very appealing. Why should I put in effort to something that doesn't look like it's got any effort in it?

You need:
 * Longer, more detailed, more relevant bios.
 * More organised power/ability listing. Use bullet points atleast.
 * Organise and explain your x-factors in more depth.
 * Look at other people's blog battles, you've been here long enough to know how to do that, come on.
 * Look at two of Drayco's blog battles here and here . He won format of the year for blogs like this - learn from his blog structure.