Talk:Killercraft/@comment-86.29.241.28-20170727123123

The things I find wrong with the story is that how Gefron said: "Shit, Rolvars down!" The Race dont typically use Swearing, Unless somehow Gefron picked it up from Humanity, Secodnly the author of the battle cant seem to decide if Rolvar dies by getting blown apart by Izetta's Gun, or get incinerated. Plus, it seems that Rolvar is still alive despite being reduced to a mist of Blood and flesh yet crashes down. Apparently Rolvar is the Race's version of Kenny from South park, Or Krillin from DBZ. Other than that, It was a great story. 7.8/10