User blog comment:WinterSpider/The Punisher (MAX) vs Big Boss/@comment-32516697-20191031222833

Some criticism and recommended improvements. Please don't take this the wrong way; the reason I'm saying any of this is you can improve.

1. You definitely need information on all the weapons. You can't expect your voters to look up every single weapon for their edges. Additionally, two of Big Boss's weapons are inappropriate: he never used a Fairbairn-Sykes knife and he never used the Patriot in battle, excluding non-canon easter eggs.

2. You need more detail on the x-factors. This is a good place to start mentioning feats. For example, you say that Frank is a natural gunman, so give an example of his marksmanship that would demonstrate that well. Say that Big Boss is a good enough H2H fighter that he can floor an entire special forces unit, rather than just "it wreaks havoc on the enemy". Numbers and generic descriptions are meaningless.

3. You need to explain the rules of the fight if you want it to take place in Boston. A fight in a heavily populated area is hugely different from any other, so you really ought to better explain the circumstances.

4. Formatting issues. You should put those slideshows in the tabber, so that the images of the weapons are right next to the relevant information. It'll make the blog easier to view and remove a lot of ugly whitespace. I highly recommend that you use the source editor; it's much easier to use. If you need help figuring how to make things look the way you want, you always check out the source code for other blogs and copy it.