User blog comment:Ethank14/Batman (DCAU) VS Spiderman (TAS)/@comment-26074921-20121001165445

Not bad Ethank.

However the formatting could use some work, for example you seem to use alot of parenthesis when characters are not speaking which makes it hard to follow and keep track of what is happening. and the battle is simply a large block of text. I'd suggest following standard writing format and begin a new paragraph with each new speaker, then forget about using parenthesis entirely as their entire function can be accomplished with normal writing mechanics (Often the rule of thumb is avoid them where possible). I'd say more about about it, but I don't want to seem like a formatting hard ass. Just trying to give some advice.

Good job though.