User blog comment:Dewaynehall235/Green Berets vs Koppasus/@comment-32516697-20190627010007/@comment-35680048-20190627032730

I'm going to supplement Laqy here by saying it's very clear you aren't taking much more than say 5 minutes to do the majority of this blog. You can literally copy and paste short biographies of both of these groups from this wiki or regular Wikipedia. Same can be said for the weapons.

And X-factors would be highly appreciated. I and other users shouldn't have to search for information on these two groups' training, experience etc. These are vital to determining an outcome in a matchup like this.I don't know anything about Kopassus, so how the hell am I supposed to know how they'd do against the Green Berets? I don't. You need to provide this information.

And yes, your format is in desperate need of a makeover. Pictures most of all are needed. Believe it or not, not all of us have heard of a Pindad SS3. So if you aren't providing a description, a picture would at least give us an idea of what we're talking about here.

And finally, the Karambit and Chris Reeves knives are once again not weapons that either side uses. Kopassus uses the Fairbairn-Sykes knife. And while it's hard to find a knifw specifically for the Green Berets, I think the KA-BAR would be sufficient for this battle (Unless others can find a better example here)

My basic point echoes Laqy's here.You have to put much more effort into the creation of your blog. I understand that you are new here, and these are your first few blogs.

But for reference, as a total newbie, the links at the bottom are my first few blogs. They have their problems and aren't amazing in quality, but they're descriptive enough to get the point across. This was because I looked at the styles of other users and put them in my blogs. What im saying is if I can do this, you can do this if you just take a hell of a lot more time researching and setting up blogs. And if you need help, ask. My first few blogs: https://deadliestfiction.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Tybaltcapulet/26th_of_July_Movement_vs._Khmer_Rouge#WikiaArticleComments

https://deadliestfiction.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Tybaltcapulet/Juramentado_vs._Zulu?comments_page=1