User blog comment:Leolab/Ancient User Tourney - Sign-ups/@comment-28394113-20160506140347/@comment-422690-20160508024902

This isn't making the cut. First off, the height & weight are off. He's a good 80 lbs overweight, and in the 1200s you Ireland you didn't have enough stuff to eat to gain that much weight, let alone in muscle. Second off, that Kilij is pure bullshit. There's no way that dagger's fitting into the handle of the Kilij. Third off, you never mention what type of poison you're using.

And another minor gripe: You need to proofread. There were so many typing errors I thought this was another anon entry.