Talk:Dementors/@comment-4708902-20151109024114/@comment-422690-20151109193436

You shouldn't use names too often, yes, but you need to use them more. As with all things, balance is key here. Use names too often and the writing gets awkward, but use them too little and you get what you have here - a fairly confusing mess.

The ending probably should have remained on your blog rather than getting posted here. Since Seasons are a meta concept, those kinds of previews make absolutely no sense on pages, which are simply collections of battles rather than a coherent Season or story.