User blog comment:Redkite/User Battle: Lullaby (Las) vs. Terrarrian (Terra)/@comment-422690-20140429015148/@comment-422690-20140429204708

For a start, you should scrap having both SWAT and SEAL training; choose one or the other. For two, Detail. You need more detail; look at Lullaby's bio here, and the bios of all the assassins in Las's A Hole in the Ace competition (well, almost all. Don't look at Shamrock or The African). See the information? They're painting a picture of who the character is rather than just what they can do.