User blog comment:Redkite/User Battle: Lullaby (Las) vs. Terrarrian (Terra)/@comment-422690-20140429015148

So...

Lullaby should get this without a problem. For one, hoe doesn't even need to kill Terrain - he just needs to enter a house and kill the lawyer, who's too stupid to have more than one person guarding him (and too stupid to not cross Cicada). Since Lullaby's specialty is stealth, he can very, very easily be in and out without Terrain even realizing he's there.

On top of this, there's the arsenal he brings. Terrain's loaded down with an RPG, a broadsword, and several really, really heavy guns. In a fight against a far more mobile opponent, he's screwed. On top of that, there's the melee weaponry. You're in a house. You can't swing a broadsword or staff with any sort of force due to the close-in confines of a house.

Honestly, Lullaby gets this. He's better equipped, more skilled, and better written.

Now let me just take a brief aside here. I'm going to be frank and likely a little vulgar: Terrarian, your character fucking sucks. That shitstain is a terribly written and terribly formulated Mary Sue. Take a look at Lullaby. Take a look at any goddamn OC put out by Pach, Swg, Kite, Skully, or myself. And then take a look at yours. Do you see how fucking lazy and incomplete it is? And the worst part about it all is that you were the one challenging someone. You had all the time in the world to make a character that would be fun to write and fun to read, but instead you give us this pile of crap. Seriously, man, learn how to write an interesting character. It'll help here and in the real world.