User blog comment:Leolab/Ancient User Tourney - Sign-ups/@comment-28394113-20160506140347/@comment-422690-20160514160904


 * 1) Your bio is awful. It's excessively short and incredibly lazy. I'm not asking for something like EA's; just need enough to know your character. Further, the Zulu combat style is not compatible with your weapon selection.
 * 2) There's still a lot of typing errors. Fixing these will make it easier on both me and the voters.
 * 3) You still never mention what poison you're using on your arrows.
 * 4) If you're using arsenic as a poison, you're going to need to be more specific in its administration to your weapon. Plants and snake venom have well-known methods of application, but arsenic does not. As of now I'm assuming you're dusting the sword with powdered arsenic, which isn't going to stick.
 * 5) That targe is bullshit. An average targe - with a 21-inch diameter - weighs in excess of 7 lbs. Yours is twice that size and has a ten-inch spike at the end, meaning 10 lbs is far too light.