Thread:The Golden Moustache/@comment-32769624-20191214102630/@comment-35680048-20200116184424

I actually do have some tips myself about your OC.

1. This is less about the OC itself and more about your formatting in general. You seem to use a large header for every single category, including individual powers. Putting those headers for every single category makes it harder to keep track of them.Some good examples of well formatted OCs can be seen here: https://deadliestfiction.fandom.com/wiki/User:WanderingSkull

2. Your OC seems to be ridiculously powerful to the point of being quite OP. As someone who has seen many OCs and has one of his own, making an OC like this generally makes it extremely hard to find matchups against other OCs or even other warriors on the wiki. Combining all of these powers together makes him entirely untouchable especially when you put invulnerability, regen and resurrection together. So that means even if another OC or normal warrior kills them (which with all the things Horseman can survive is super hard to do), he can come back 7 times. Add all these other utility powers like telekinesis and stealth abilities, and Horseman totally dominates most people you probably would like to use against him.His weaknesses that you've put for him aren't nearly as damaging to his power as you may first think,as most can't really remove invulnerability spells, and being insane with all of his powers isn't going to take away from all his other powers and skills. I would suggest heavily toning down his powers to something less inherently OP, especially if it's your first OC here.