User blog comment:Battlefan237/Anton Chigurh vs Walter White/@comment-4661256-20160626224016

Hey man, I'm glad to see that you're coming up with some pretty cool battle ideas, but there's a lot of room for improvement. In terms of the blog itself, this page should help a lot. You can also always look at someone else's battles to see their style--the more visually appealing a battle looks, the easier it will be for other users to look at the information provided and get in a vote for you.

In terms of the actual loadout, there's quite a bit that needs work. A lot of your weapons comparisons don't make a lot of sense. A suppressed Remington shotgun should never be compared to a light machine gun like the M60 for a whole host of reasons (the M60 has a much higher magazine capacity, a much longer effective range, and a much higher rate of fire, for starters), but in general, a shotgun is usually not a long-ranged weapon anyway. Similarly, the M4 (which is an assault rifle and not a machine gun) should not be compared to the Tec-9 submachine gun because they're simply different types of weapons. Usually it's best to compare weapons of the same "class" or "design" against each other--when you have mismatches it tends to make things really unfair for one warrior or the other.

If you have any specific questions, you can always feel free to leave a message on my talk page and I'd be more than willing to help you out. You can also check out the battle policy page for more information. Good luck mate, I'm sure with some more practice you'll be up to speed in no time!