User blog comment:Tomahawk23/Venom (Eddie Brock) Vs. Amon (Noatak)/@comment-5338740-20120725072208

Alright, uhh, lemme break it down....

After defeating wave after wave of Skrull attacks, and dealing with other shit, the Fantastic Four are getting sick and tired of fighting for Earth and want to take a break.
This line makes no sense, "dealing with other shit" and why would they take a break? They are dedicated to their jobs! Which is protecting earth.

"Alright that does it, I ain't helping out anyone anymore. Let other ass holes handle any problems, I ain't doing this shit anymore", said Mr. Fantastic."

NO JUST NO

"Suddenly Doom flew right in front of them out of the blew."

....

WHY WOULD SPIDER-MAN SUDDENLY APPEARED! WHY WOULD THE FOUR TAKE A VACTION?!?!?!?!

...That entire section aside let's move onto the battle.

"Right out of no where Venom came out of the blue and jumped off a building straight at Doom. Doom turned his hand and shot a portal at him which took him straight to the Avatar Universe in 170 ASC on top of a building in Republic City."

What a way to put venom into the Avatar Universe.

The reason why they fight makes no sense.

"What are you"? said Amon.

"Your demise!!!" Venom screamed.

WHAT? They see eachother and exchange two lines of dialogue and then fight?

Then the fight, it's so poorley spaced that I almost couldn't read it, but it's good for entertainment I suppose

Overall this is like a cheesy 80's action movie, with extra cheese. It's dumb and makes no sense and the dialogue is ridiculous, but it's entertaining none the less.

3.5/5 Overall.